I will explain about the characteristics of the camp Big Apple, Ranch West, and the Head Start Splash. I will first explain the characteristics and compare and contrast the camps
Characteristics
The camp big apple
-We can prepare crucial tests like SAT-We can be global because we stay with students from around the world
-We can experience things we can't do in Korea
ex) Broadway shows etc.The ranch west camp
-We can choose subjects so we can enjoy the camp
-The camp period is long enough
-We can have new experiences like hiking and canoeing
-We can concentrate just on studying because it is in the natureThe head start splash
-We can experience nature
-We can live with our families-We can study a variety of things because it is 5 weeks
-We can have new experiences on an island
-We can learn the same things that international schools teach
-We can trust the teachers because they have certificates to teach english as second language
Now I will compare and contrast these camps.
The camps all have a perpose to improve our English. Also, we can experience new things.
The period is different. One is 3weeks but the other two is each 4weeks and 5weeks. Only we can trust the head start splash teachers because they have a certificate to teach English as a Second Language but the other camp teachers could have a doctor degree for other things. Also, the living place of the students are different.The big apple camp students and the ranch west camp students live in a dormitory or homestay with foriegn friends. However, the head start splash camp students live with their parents so they don't have more time to use English. Although the two other camps students study in a quiet rural place, the big apple camp students live in the noisy New York city.
Thank you for reading my comparing and contrasting post.
Concerning these things I think that the Camp Big Apple is the best thing because of these reasons. First, it is 4 weeks so it is not too long or short and we can sudy crucial tests like SAT. Also, by staying with students from around the world, we can learn more global things. Finally, we can have a "New York Experience" and do things like watching broadway shows that we can't do in Korea.
Concerning these things I think that the Camp Big Apple is the best thing because of these reasons. First, it is 4 weeks so it is not too long or short and we can sudy crucial tests like SAT. Also, by staying with students from around the world, we can learn more global things. Finally, we can have a "New York Experience" and do things like watching broadway shows that we can't do in Korea.
Not bad overall but you need to work on writing within the structural format. Make is look like a proper essay with clear paragraph divisions.
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